Many students find it difficult to learn subjects like mathematics and philosophy and hence they should be optional in schools. Do you agree or disagree?
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philosophy
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their selection shold
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To begin
with, studying in schools should be fun not the source to put children in trouble. Students
will enjoy learning if they are going to learn it by heart. Few traditional subjects
like mathametics
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mathematics
philosphy
that are being taught by teachers for centuries are not liked by Correct your spelling
philosophy
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a majority
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. Teaching them by force just because they are compulsory can put Correct your spelling
students
students
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mental stress. Change preposition
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Moreover
, it will not be benefial
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individual's
career Correct article usage
an individual's
acheivements
as well as society's better development. Correct your spelling
achievements
For example
, Research published in world
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the world
magzine
recently revealed that the number of suicidal attempts in teenagers is Correct your spelling
magazine
increasng
due to Correct your spelling
increasing
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selection
of profession by parents that kids do not feel enjoyable for themselves.
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On the other hand
, if students
are given freedom
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the freedom
seleect
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select
subjects
or profession that they really enjoy will put a positive impact on kids mental health, potential future goals acheivements
as well as better development of nations. Correct your spelling
achievements
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, if child
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the child
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creative
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the subject
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the potential
instead
of forcing him to stuty
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study
stay
mathemetics
and become an Correct your spelling
mathematics
enjeener
.
To conclude, in my opinion, it is compulsory for the better development of individuals as well as Correct your spelling
engineer
socities
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societies
subjects
based on likes or dislikes of children to gain better input and healthier and happiest nations.Submitted by drhaleema on
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