Many students find it difficult to learn subjects like mathematics and philosophy and hence they should be optional in schools. Do you agree or disagree?

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of pupils find it hard to study
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a few
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subjects
such
as mathematics and
philosphy
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philosophy
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therefore
their selection
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should
be left on
students
choice. I completely agree with
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suggestion.
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essay will explain
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To begin
with, studying in schools should be fun not the source to put children in trouble.
Students
will enjoy learning if they are going to learn it by heart. Few traditional
subjects
like
mathametics
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mathematics
and
philosphy
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philosophy
that are being taught by teachers for centuries are not liked by
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the majority
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of
stundents
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students
. Teaching them by force just because they are compulsory can put
students
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mental stress.
Moreover
, it will not be
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beneficial
for
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an individual's
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career
acheivements
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achievements
as well as society's better development.
For example
, Research published in
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the world
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magzine
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magazine
recently revealed that the number of suicidal attempts in teenagers is
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increasing
due to
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stress
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selection
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of profession by parents that kids do not feel enjoyable for themselves.
On the other hand
, if
students
are given
freedom
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the freedom
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to
seleect
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select
subjects
or profession that they really enjoy will put a positive impact on kids mental health, potential future goals
acheivements
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achievements
as well as better development of nations.
For instance
, if
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the child
a child
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is having
creative
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a creative
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mind and he enjoys painting let her or him
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select
subject
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the subject
a subject
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of arts, as he or she has
potential
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the potential
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to become an eminent artist and celebrity.
instead
of forcing him to
stuty
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study
stay
mathemetics
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mathematics
and become an
enjeener
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engineer
. To conclude, in my opinion, it is compulsory for the better development of individuals as well as
socities
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societies
to allow free selection of study
subjects
based on likes or dislikes of children to gain better input and healthier and happiest nations.
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