Some people believe that a person's culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that has only a minor influence. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

The given table illustrates
student
financial resources in the United Kingdom over a span of ten years. (For a university professor, write
apaper
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a paper
paper

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explaining the details shown below.) Overall, when looked at the table in general, in ten years period,
Student
resources with
Student
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a Student

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loan, earning and other internal income increased while
student
resources with parental contribution and grant external income decreased. It is worth noticing that
interel
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internal
interest

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income of
student
indicate
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indicates

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a rise
about
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of about

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50%.
Bsides
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Besides

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,
student
loan
be
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is

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the most increase among the three and ıt
is improve
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is improved
is improving

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from 0% to 24%.
Furthermore
, grand and parental contribution significantly
reducted
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reduced

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to 50%. İn
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the other

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other hand
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another hand
other hands

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, both were 16% and 14% respectively.
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