Some people believe that a person's culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that has only a minor influence. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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financial resources in the United Kingdom over a span of ten years. (For a university professor, write

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explaining the details shown below.) Overall, when looked at the table in general, in ten years period,

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loan, earning and other internal income increased while

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resources with parental contribution and grant external income decreased. It is worth noticing that

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a rise

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50%.

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the most increase among the three and ıt

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from 0% to 24%.

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, both were 16% and 14% respectively.

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Some people believe that a person's culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that has only a minor influence. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

Many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this develoment outweigh the disadvantages?

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development.

If a product is good or it meets people's needs, people will buy it so advertising is unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income unfortunately tourism can also be a source of problems if it not well managed. What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh it's drawbacks?