Some people feel that entertainers (film stars, sport stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of jobs that should be highly paid?
Do
film
starts and celebrities get pretty high Add an article
the film
salaries
? The answer has always been relative. Some people think that they are getting more than they deserve, while others believe that they are getting fair salaries
for their job. The following paragraphs will explain why I totally agree that they should get much money
and will mention other types of work
that should secure higher salaries
.
Movie and sports stars are usually working almost all the
day, and have no time to do other types of Correct article usage
apply
work
. That's why they should be paid high salaries
. Additionally
, they have a
great value, since they are participating in people's pleasure and the main core of their Remove the article
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work
is to make their audiences have fun. Such
a
great Correct article usage
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work
must be appreciated by huge
amount of Add an article
the huge
a huge
money
. For example
, football players are spending 90% of their time training hard to be fit and help their fans to have fun, so that their wages must be good enough to have a good life since they can't have other jobs
.
There are many professions that should be paid a lot of money
. First
, doctors are extremely valuable for their societies. They are not only treating the
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,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
they protect the people from getting ill by discovering new medicines to fight infections. So that it is fair enough to get the highest possible money
. For instance
, the production of new vaccines requires years from the
hard Remove the article
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work
by doctors who should be paid alot
for that. Correct your spelling
a lot
Second
, teacher
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the teacher
are
the great Change the verb form
is
massengers
who helped us to be useful members Correct your spelling
messengers
for
our countries. Their wages should be revised and raised to thank them for their fantastic role. According to a survey done in France for the list of Change preposition
of
jobs
that are unfairly paid, teaching was one of the top five jobs
on the list.
In conclusion, despite the fact that celebrities are getting high money
, in my opinion
they totally deserve it, as these Add a comma
,opinion
jobs
can't be combined with others so they should secure good money
. Furthermore
, I believe that other jobs
like doctors and teachers should be paid more and moreSubmitted by moamenrazeen on
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