Some people feel that entertainers (film stars, sport stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of jobs that should be highly paid?

Do
film
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starts and celebrities get pretty high
salaries
? The answer has always been relative. Some people think that they are getting more than they deserve, while others believe that they are getting fair
salaries
for their job. The following paragraphs will explain why I totally agree that they should get much
money
and will mention other types of
work
that should secure higher
salaries
. Movie and sports stars are usually working almost all
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day, and have no time to do other types of
work
. That's why they should be paid high
salaries
.
Additionally
, they have
a
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great value, since they are participating in people's pleasure and the main core of their
work
is to make their audiences have fun.
Such
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great
work
must be appreciated by
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amount of
money
.
For example
, football players are spending 90% of their time training hard to be fit and help their fans to have fun, so that their wages must be good enough to have a good life since they can't have other
jobs
. There are many professions that should be paid a lot of
money
.
First
, doctors are extremely valuable for their societies. They are not only treating
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sick patients
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but
also
they protect the people from getting ill by discovering new medicines to fight infections. So that it is fair enough to get the highest possible
money
.
For instance
, the production of new vaccines requires years from
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hard
work
by doctors who should be paid
alot
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a lot
for that.
Second
,
teacher
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are
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the great
massengers
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messengers
who helped us to be useful members
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our countries. Their wages should be revised and raised to thank them for their fantastic role. According to a survey done in France for the list of
jobs
that are unfairly paid, teaching was one of the top five
jobs
on the list. In conclusion, despite the fact that celebrities are getting high
money
, in my
opinion
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they totally deserve it, as these
jobs
can't be combined with others so they should secure good
money
.
Furthermore
, I believe that other
jobs
like doctors and teachers should be paid more and more
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