Some people feel that entertainers (film stars, sport stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of jobs that should be highly paid?

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starts and celebrities get pretty high

salaries

? The answer has always been relative. Some people think that they are getting more than they deserve, while others believe that they are getting fair

salaries

for their job. The following paragraphs will explain why I totally agree that they should get much

money

and will mention other types of

work

that should secure higher

salaries

. Movie and sports stars are usually working almost all

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day, and have no time to do other types of

work

. That's why they should be paid high

salaries

.

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great value, since they are participating in people's pleasure and the main core of their

work

is to make their audiences have fun.

Such

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great

work

must be appreciated by

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amount of

money

.

For example

, football players are spending 90% of their time training hard to be fit and help their fans to have fun, so that their wages must be good enough to have a good life since they can't have other

jobs

. There are many professions that should be paid a lot of

money

.

First

, doctors are extremely valuable for their societies. They are not only treating

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sick patients

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but

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they protect the people from getting ill by discovering new medicines to fight infections. So that it is fair enough to get the highest possible

money

.

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, the production of new vaccines requires years from

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hard

work

by doctors who should be paid

alot

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a lot

for that.

Second

,

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the great

massengers

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who helped us to be useful members

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our countries. Their wages should be revised and raised to thank them for their fantastic role. According to a survey done in France for the list of

jobs

that are unfairly paid, teaching was one of the top five

jobs

on the list. In conclusion, despite the fact that celebrities are getting high

money

, in my

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they totally deserve it, as these

jobs

can't be combined with others so they should secure good

money

.

Furthermore

, I believe that other

jobs

like doctors and teachers should be paid more and more