You are looking for a part-time job at a football club. Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter, • introduce yourself • explain what experience and special skills you have • tell him/her when you think you could start

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in reference to an advertisement for a job which was published on 22 November in Hamilton newspaper. My name is Dave, and I am 28 years old, I have completed my course regarding “Health & witness” from Mohawk University. During my college days, I was the captain of my football team,

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I pose intermediate knowledge about

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sport as well as experience. I have learnt that you are looking for a

coach

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coaching

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assistant for your club, and I am immensely keen to join your staff as a part-time assistant coach. As I mentioned earlier, I am

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a football player. I played in the FIFA world cup

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year, as a team member of

UFC

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club, but due to my heart

disease

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my doctor suggested

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take leave from the game for 2 years. I met all the terms and requirements as mentioned in the job advertisement, so I consider myself a perfect individual for

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job due to the fact that I was a professional player, and I can teach your club members a number of skills. I can start

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week if you would like to arrange an interview

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I am available on 22 and 23 November from 8:00 a.m. to 5:00 p.m. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Dave Batista

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