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any people live in towns and cities where there are museums that promote historical and artistic objects of cultural importance, but they don't visit them. Why do you think many people don't visit museums? What is the cultural importance of museums to society?

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 before forming an opinion.
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 individuals like fun entertainment but
museums
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 and peaceful places.
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people
 like picnic and hunting for animals .
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museums
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 important for new generations
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 our tradition and culture on to
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 generation.
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 explain all past construction how can
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 during the previous dynasties . In
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people
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more information about culture, history and science through
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people
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museums
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