Many people live in towns and cities where there are museums that promote historical and artistic objects of cultural importance, but they don't visit them. Why do you think many people don't visit museums? What is the cultural importance of museums to society?

it is irrefutable that ,today there are
museums
most developing day by day .a few
people
believe that society is important to show various exhibits. a certain segment of society believes that
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individuals are don'
t
visit
. while it's is a very important role in cervical respect . I would like to delve into both arguments before forming opinions. to being with , there are many differences between life in a small town or in a big Cities .
however
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usually it's not the same to live in a big city
that is
a small town .
first
of all if you want to go to shopping centre .
besides
to there are several reasons why local
people
don'
t
visit
the local places of historical and artistic .while, individuals are busy with their domestic chores and they are happy their sedentary lifestyle .
for example
it should be noted that Delhi boasts of a number of
museums
and historical monuments , the local
people
's don'
t
visit
them because the majority of the population in Delhi is working .they have working hours and after coming back from home
moreover
,
people
are
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in the city to explore are places of interest, so they will definitely
visit
museums
.
on the other hand
, negative
people
to
museums
and historical sites ,
for example
,schools can give their students arguments related to the historical , cultural and traditional of their native place .
in addition
to,
this
will most parents to take their children to
museums
to collect useful information.
however
, local administration can conduct various exhibitions at these places to attract on local individuals for
hence
we should the exhibition local handsome products can attraction
people
. to conclude, local ,
people
don'
t
visit
local
museums
and historical sites due to, the fact they are busy with their life and work .
moreover
,conducting exhibition and giving arts and historical bassed assessment in school will help for students.
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