Some people argue that space exploration has had more to do with national pride than international effort. To what extent do you agree with this? How do you think space exploration will change in the future?

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consider the

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between nations the main reason for the

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of

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of global action. In my view,

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statement is totally true and I can support my point by the example of war and technological revolution. In the future, looking at the present technologies being invented, I suggest

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exploration

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is going to achieve one more peak after the flights to the Moon. All the scientific and technical development is caused by

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rather than the mutual desire of

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to make

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civilization flourish. Since time homo sapiens had developed their cognitive abilities and cooperated into congestions, those congestions of

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the population

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have always been in a

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to dominate and survive.

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goal achieved

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developed efficient ways to become victorious in various battles

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the help of technological advancement.

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WWII information played a major role and different ways of sending and encrypting the information had been developed by Germany. Those technologies are now ensuring the privacy of messages. The same is applied to

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exploration

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, and countries

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participated in the

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were competing. As is known from history, USSR and America were the main contributors. Even if they had come up with the decision that

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is mutual,

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, Russian and American parts were established in the International

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Station. Their purpose was to show their technological advancement over each other as the Cold War was still running. When it comes to predictions about

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exploration

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, we need to consider the efforts of

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like Elon Musk, who has set up an ambitious goal of reaching

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Mars and building

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colony on other Planets. Latest SpaceX shuttles are using inventions of the highest degree constructed by several

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types of research

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on the materials that can endure long-term flights and conditions of

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.

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, many scientists are searching for

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planets and civilizations comparable to Earth and humanity and the field is advancing rapidly. To conclude,

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exploration

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have

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always been an essential part of

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a competition

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of nations

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intended to show their technologies and raise respect towards them. In the future, considering the rapid positive trend of the lens, humans can confidently foresee successful results.