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advertisement
cannot be avoided and that it brings a positive impact on our life. I partially agree that it brings benefits; Use synonyms
however
, it can Linking Words
also
create financial problems.
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advertisement
creates revenue, especially Use synonyms
that
it invites customers to buy certain products from a company. The industry of Correct word choice
since
advertisement
gives job opportunities Use synonyms
to
various fields. Change preposition
in
Additionally
, it informs consumers of the products that are being sold. Linking Words
Therefore
, minimizing the time they need to decide on what item to get. Linking Words
For instance
, research has revealed that radio Linking Words
announcement
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announcements
swayed
the decision of dog owners on what kibble they will pick and it saves them precious time.
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sway
However
, it increases the risk of impulse buying. Those who work in the Linking Words
advertisement
industry Use synonyms
knows
very well how to exploit the Dopamine rush that consumers feel when they see something new. People who cannot control themselves, often end up buying unnecessary lucrative belongings Correct subject-verb agreement
know
such
as a mobile phone. After buying Linking Words
the
product that they did not properly plan,Correct article usage
a
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the
a
feeling
of regret and depression Fix the agreement mistake
feelings
is
felt. Correct subject-verb agreement
are
Consequently
, in order to feel happy ,again they will engage themselves in another streak of impulse buying. Linking Words
For example
, a survey conducted by a group of students who studied at Harvard found out that more than 80% of young adults who bought newly released Linking Words
phone
did not think about the financial consequences that it brings and they Fix the agreement mistake
phones
end
up having huge credits.
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ended
To conclude
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
advertisement
has a good impact on the company, especially Replace the word
advertising
that
it provides jobs. Correct word choice
because
Additionally
, it helps people to decide Linking Words
quicker
. Replace the word
quickly
However
, it increases instances of impulse buying which is destructive if not controlled.Linking Words
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