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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

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In the modern
world
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 the issue of
starvation
 is frequently discussed due to its high importance.
This
 essay will discuss the reasons
of
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 malnutrition despite the progress which was made recently in
agriculture
 and suggest possible ways to handle
this
 situation. I am totally convinced that going hungry is inconceivable nowadays. I tend to think that there is a harmful word tendency according to which affluent courtiers are getting richer whilst
another
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 ones are becoming poorer in
wide
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 range of spheres as well as in
agriculture
.
Agriculture
 is one of the key points in supplying the country with vital products and food. Highly-developed
countries
 either have their own
high
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level
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agriculture
 or they serve a trade with other
countries
 as
a
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 main tool in gaining food.
For instance
,
such
 destitute
countries
 as African ones are supposed to suffer
the
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starvation
 as they got used to doing
this
. It is an uphill task for them to overcome
this
 problem without giving a hand
from
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 more developed representatives of the world arena. To address
this
 problem, international organizations are considered to put their efforts together in order to assist
countries
 going hungry.
First
, loans should be given to less developed
countries
 under appropriate conditions for them. It can
also
 be mentioned, that charity agencies could play an essential role in product support. In conclusion, after analyzing the subject in detail, I would like to highlight that
starvation
 cannot be observed in the contemporary highly-developed world where garbage dumps are as high as mountains in some places. International actors are supposed to do their best
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reduction
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 poverty and
starvation
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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