Some people believe that Bangkok Metropolitan Administration should invest in the expansion of the underground railway system instead of roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea?
Many
people
suggest that Bangkok
Add an article
the Bangkok
city
Administration should subsidize in
the Change preposition
apply
expansion
of the underground railways
system rather than roads. It is a tendency to believe that using individual cars is Change to a genitive case
railway's
railways'
the
Correct article usage
a
convenience
ways to travel in Replace the word
convenient
Bangkok
. However
, Bangkok
is the most bustling city
in Thailand and the top rank of traffic
problems city
in the world.
According to this
point of view, Bangkok
city
is the most popular destination for people
to work and travel. It is high
density of Add an article
a high
the high
city
- dwellers as well as the
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apply
traffic
problems. For example
, people
who live in Bangkok
need to wake up early in the morning and leave home before 6 o’clock to travel to their work place
because Correct your spelling
workplace
the
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apply
traffic
jams are always happened
in the morning. Change to the active voice
always happen
happened
However
, there are various types of transportations in Bangkok
such
as BTS, MRT, taxi and private cars. It cannot denied
that private cars Change the verb form
be denied
deny
is
the most famous transportation. There are not enough routes in BTS or MRT reach in every destination in the Change the verb form
are
city
and this
is the main problem of the
public transport in Remove the article
apply
Bangkok
.
Therefore
, the government or the Bangkok
Metropolitan Administration should invest in the expansion
of the underground railway system such
as MRT.
However
, there is the main struckling
in Correct your spelling
struggling
trucking
this
idea happens
nowadays. Add a pronoun
that happens
Bangkok
at the present time is in
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at
the
instability ground point because of rising Correct article usage
an
in
ocean levels. Change preposition
apply
For instance
, flooding is happened
in every rainy Change to the active voice
happens
has happened
seasons
and it Change to a singular noun
season
make
the ground Change the verb form
makes
loosing
their intensity; thereby the grounds are unsteadily and not enough to do any heavy infrastructures. According to Replace the word
losing
this
problem, the government should concern about the quality of the infrastructure of the underground railway stations in the future to make the sustainable city
rather than expansion
only the roads.
In conclusion, I believed that the government should invest in the expansion
of the
public transportation, particularly in the underground railway system. Correct article usage
apply
Expansion
of roads can increase the traffic
density and it will affect the people
in the city
. Subsidizing and funding on
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apply
the
sustainable infrastructure might be difficult and cost an enormous investment but it is the best way for the Correct article usage
apply
city
in the future.Submitted by noppapat_k on
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