IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 5

Some people argue that space exploration has had more to do with national pride than international effort. To what extent do you agree with? How do you think space exploration will change in the future? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

#people #space #exploration #pride #effort #change #future
In
last
Correct article usage
the last
show examples
 60 years,
people
's opinion about outer
space
 has totally changed. Since those years,
space
exploration
become
Change the verb form
becomes
show examples
like
Change preposition
apply
show examples
more national pride, than
international
Correct article usage
an international
show examples
 effort. What are
consequences
Correct article usage
the consequences
show examples
 of
this
? To my mind, society stopped thinking about
space
exploration
 internationally. On the one hand, humanity began an arms race back in the
last
 centuries, but
this
 is what made
people
 think of
space
exploration
 as
a
Remove the article
apply
show examples
national pride. In 1960, a race for
space
 between the USA and the USSR began, which divided the world in two. It was national pride that each side achieves in
this
 sphere.
For instance
, the
first
 flight into open
space
 will be assigned to the USSR, and the
first
 landing on the moon was assigned to the United States.
On the other hand
, strong international relations are being built between the world powers. In the International
Space
 Station, astronauts from different countries work together for the benefit of all mankind. All that
people
 require to unleash all efforts to achieve
this
 goal and colonize other planets is humanity will. Examples
such
 as the help of American cosmonauts to Russians in 2020
instill
Change the spelling
instil
show examples
 confidence in a better future for
space
exploration
.
Moreover
, thanks to these actions, a person will be able to explore the solar system and reach a new level. To conclude,
space
exploration
 will be essential in the future.
Therefore
,
people
 should be obsessed
for
Change preposition
with
show examples
this
.
Submitted by anjelika-mama on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: