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n Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

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It is becoming a trend in the United Kindom and most
of
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the
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western countries, Senior citizens are being sent to
the
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old
age
 homes where the
health
care
 professionals
provides
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care
 to the individuals whilst the governing body of
nation
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 have to spend a significant amount
for
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such
 amenities.
However
, I firmly believe that
this
 might be
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 ultra-challenging situation for the
families
 of senior citizens but it is the only place that can make them feel loved and psychologically
stress free
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 as well as reduce the burden for the leadership. There are two vital factors why
families
 have to support their elders.
Firstly
, Most
of
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old-
age
 home people are extremely despondent as they feel lonely without their
families
.
Secondly
, the seniors will be feel abandoned as it will affect them psychologically . There have been incidents recorded that in some of the countries
such
 as India and
japan
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, people over 65 years live with their
families
 and
grand- children
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instead
 of old
age
 shelters which increase their
age
considerablly
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considerably
 due to negligible psychological stress.
Thus
, the
families
 should aid and abet their senior member as it will
be help
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 being a
health
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 family.
Additionally
, The Governments in
such
 countries are already paying for the medical and
health
care
 of all
age
 groups including senior members. Old
age
 home and
health
care
 requires a significant amount of funding and are owned by the private sectors.
Moreover
, a large segment of
population
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prefer
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 private old
age
 home for their predecessors which make expansive bills for the government as these are included in Medicare and
health
care
 benefits. To exemplify, blah blah blah.
Therefore
, expecting to pay for old
age
 homes along with medicare will be
burden
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 on
budget
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 of the government. To conclude,
to
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 my perspective,
the
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families
 should provide
care
 to their old members. I firmly suggest that for the well being of
grand parents
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grandparents
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 there should be support from
household
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the household
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instead
 of
government
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the government
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