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Some people argue that space exploration has had more to do with national pride than international effort. To what extent do you agree with? How do you think space exploration will change in the future? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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Space exploration is one of the most important areas for every
country
. Each
country
 is trying to develop
this
 area in its own way. Despite the fact that in global research peoples share their experience, everyone is trying to develop
this
 area in their own
country
. I completely agree with
this
 statement. Because in the global industry, every
country
 is trying to compete. Formally, there is international assistance and countries are trying to exchange information and knowledge, but they do not reveal the main secrets of their space industry.
For example
, let's take the United States every year in
this
country
 there are new and new technologies, types of rockets and other types of equipment. The well-known company Ilon Masks SpaceX shares new discoveries every year.
However
, many countries do not even think about using the experience of Americans in their development. Does
this
 mean that there is not enough global aid? I think not, every
country
 is trying to discover something new and does not reveal the main secrets of its developments. discovering something new, the
country
 develops faster and tries to break away from its competitors. In brief, it is more beneficial for countries to develop individually than to develop a global system of space exploration. By developing its own sphere, each
country
 gets individual chances for
further
 finding an acceptable planet.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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