Some people argue that space exploration has had more to do with national pride than international effort. To what extent do you agree with? How do you think space exploration will change in the future? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
In
21st
century our technologies have evolved so much that allows humanity to dive 11,000 meters deep and travel through Change the article
the 21st
space
. Nowadays, Space
exploration
takes the lead in development but someone argue
that Change the verb form
argues
this
become into competition
between Add an article
a competition
the competition
countries
and in these latter days it becomes more national pride
than international effort.
In our generation, countries
worry about their pride
and strength more than possible results from cooperation. A superpower country is trying to show his
power to other Correct pronoun usage
its
countries
,
because they will receive more respect and benefit from it. Remove the comma
apply
Moreover
, they try to show the world that they have a superior technology
that allows them to become the leading country, but in case if countries
cooperate, humanity will reach another planets
and even stars, because collaborations help to simplify the work. Replace the adjective
another planet
other planets
For example
, China and North America became partners in terms of space
explorations leaving all pride
and distrust behind. With the Chinese advanced technology
and the United States significant experience they achieved high results. So it is only a matter of time
before international collaboration in space
exploration
becomes a reality.
The first
exploration
rocket launched in 1961
year and above I said that in our Change the article
the 1961
time
technologies are so developed that they allow humans to travel even in space
. It’s clear that after 60 years’ way of exploration
and researches will change totally. In fact, people use robots and technology
to explore space
more than fly themselves. Furthermore
, in this
adventure people use rovers and one of them called Spirit that explore Mars in real
Add a hyphen
real-time
time
. So it is possible that individuals and billionaires will personally explore space
in the future.
In conclusion, if countries
and people from whole
world will step over their Change the article
the whole
pride
to achieve a higher goal, they will rich everything no matter to complexity. Some countries
have their own strong sides like China with technology
development so only time
will tell how everything will change.Submitted by anjelika-mama on
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