Some people argue that space exploration has had more to do with national pride than international effort. To what extent do you agree with? How do you think space exploration will change in the future? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
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21st
century our technologies have evolved so much that allows humanity to dive 11,000 meters deep and travel through Change the article
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space
. Nowadays, Use synonyms
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exploration
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argue
that Change the verb form
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become into Linking Words
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between Add an article
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the competition
countries
and in these latter days it becomes more national Use synonyms
pride
than international effort.
In our generation, Use synonyms
countries
worry about their Use synonyms
pride
and strength more than possible results from cooperation. A superpower country is trying to show Use synonyms
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power to other Correct pronoun usage
its
countries
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,
because they will receive more respect and benefit from it. Remove the comma
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Moreover
, they try to show the world that they have a superior Linking Words
technology
that allows them to become the leading country, but in case if Use synonyms
countries
cooperate, humanity will reach Use synonyms
another planets
and even stars, because collaborations help to simplify the work. Replace the adjective
another planet
other planets
For example
, China and North America became partners in terms of Linking Words
space
explorations leaving all Use synonyms
pride
and distrust behind. With the Chinese advanced Use synonyms
technology
and the United States significant experience they achieved high results. So it is only a matter of Use synonyms
time
before international collaboration in Use synonyms
space
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exploration
becomes a reality.
The Use synonyms
first
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rocket launched in Use synonyms
1961
year and above I said that in our Change the article
the 1961
time
technologies are so developed that they allow humans to travel even in Use synonyms
space
. It’s clear that after 60 years’ way of Use synonyms
exploration
and researches will change totally. In fact, people use robots and Use synonyms
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space
more than fly themselves. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, in Linking Words
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adventure people use rovers and one of them called Spirit that explore Mars in Linking Words
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real-time
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. So it is possible that individuals and billionaires will personally explore Use synonyms
space
in the future.
In conclusion, if Use synonyms
countries
and people from Use synonyms
whole
world will step over their Change the article
the whole
pride
to achieve a higher goal, they will rich everything no matter to complexity. Some Use synonyms
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have their own strong sides like China with Use synonyms
technology
development so only Use synonyms
time
will tell how everything will change.Use synonyms
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