Some people argue that space exploration has had more to do with national pride than international effort. To what extent do you agree with? How do you think space exploration will change in the future? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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century our technologies have evolved so much that allows humanity to dive 11,000 meters deep and travel through
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. Nowadays,
Space
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exploration
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takes the lead in development but someone
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that
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become into
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between
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and in these latter days it becomes more national
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than international effort. In our generation,
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worry about their
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and strength more than possible results from cooperation. A superpower country is trying to show
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power to other
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because they will receive more respect and benefit from it.
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, they try to show the world that they have a superior
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that allows them to become the leading country, but in case if
countries
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cooperate, humanity will reach
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and even stars, because collaborations help to simplify the work.
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, China and North America became partners in terms of
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explorations leaving all
pride
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and distrust behind. With the Chinese advanced
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and the United States significant experience they achieved high results. So it is only a matter of
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before international collaboration in
space
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exploration
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becomes a reality. The
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exploration
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rocket launched in
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year and above I said that in our
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technologies are so developed that they allow humans to travel even in
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. It’s clear that after 60 years’ way of
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and researches will change totally. In fact, people use robots and
technology
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to explore
space
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more than fly themselves.
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, in
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adventure people use rovers and one of them called Spirit that explore Mars in
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. So it is possible that individuals and billionaires will personally explore
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in the future. In conclusion, if
countries
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and people from
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world will step over their
pride
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to achieve a higher goal, they will rich everything no matter to complexity. Some
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have their own strong sides like China with
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development so only
time
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will tell how everything will change.
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