Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Countries around the world having
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different issue related to the environment , overpopulation and
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system which is bad for our upcoming generation . so we need to take some steps which
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to improve these social issues in the world. Education is the
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issues . Because people have no awareness about the good and bad
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which increase these
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problems
. People
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have any family planning because they are not educated even they
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in population. So they need
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proper knowledge about
things
which is helpful to stop
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unwanted
population. Father and mother both play
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role in
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life if they have
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they teach
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children as well. we need
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proper schools and colleges where the children get proper information about
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nature is very important to live alive because if nature is good non polluted helps people to get
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. We all need to save trees,water and make
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fresh . If they have any work near to they go by walk which is helpful to make
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air fresh. Grow more trees use recyclable
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just wanna say that all these issues are in our hands we all need to make all these
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generation . IF we work together
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these
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we will get good results in future and
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happy by find solutions for these problems.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Ecosystem
  • Renewable resources
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Healthcare system
  • Pension crisis
  • Curriculum development
  • Digital literacy
  • E-learning platforms
  • Lifelong learning
  • Public policy
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Green technology
  • Population density
  • Generational equity
  • Economic disparity
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