Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of the following topic. Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
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There is no doubt that a lot of remedies are discovered to deter diseases that might affect people at their later ages. It is commonly believed that the government should have complete control over vaccines provided to
children
. However
, some parents
are against this
and prefer to have their choice of whether vaccinate or not. I believe it should be made mandatory by the government as it is necessary for the future.
First
and foremost, any vaccine before releasing to market should undergo strenuous clinical trials for a couple of years. It is made compulsory provided that the results are promising and effective. A survey conducted by the KIMS medical university in India suggests that all the vaccines which are currently taken by people in India have very fewer fatality rates while compared to those who die from the actual disease. Thus
, it is evident to make it mandatory by considering the positive outcome of existing results.
In addition
to that, it avoids health issues in children
whose parents
are not educated enough to decide what immunizations are necessary for their kids. This
is because parents
are not aware of the future consequences and prefer not to vaccinate. For instance
, in India polio drops which is a solution against paralyzing the spinal cord are not compulsory, but there will be announcements all over the world, and parents
should become aware of those and make sure their kids are immunized. However
, 5% of youths suffer from this
disease at a later stage because of the negligence of their parents
. Thus
it is very important to make it a country-specific law, so the hospital will be responsible to vaccinate children
.
In conclusion, vaccines are necessary for prohibiting many diseases. In my opinion, the authority to decide on vaccinating children
should not be given to parents
as it has many drawbacks than positive outcome.Submitted by amulyauu on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite