You have recently read an article in the newspaper about someone you know personally. You found that some information is wrong. Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. In your letter, write: what the article is about what the error is what you expect the editor to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Maninder Kaur, a resident of Chandigarh, and I am writing regarding an
article
published in your Newspaper on 25th February.
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was a great read, but unfortunately, it had a few incorrect pieces of information. The write-up was basically about the story of a renowned professor - Mark Gilbert, and his contributions to Use synonyms
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Chandigarh University's research department.
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mentioned that professor Gilbert is from Australia, but in fact, he is from the United Kingdom. Use synonyms
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paragraph discussed the project of wastewater treatment. It was not handled by him alone; it was co-managed by professor Mark. Linking Words
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mistakes is pivotal and should be your priority.
I look forward to reading the new updates.
Yours sincerely,
Maninder KaurLinking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite