Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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wildlife in a negative way. Many
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flow can not be changed while others disagree.
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say humans will not be able to change their negative habit to save the world because they are greedy and do not care about what is going on around the
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. Money is the main thing
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is leading our society.
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there is two different product one of them is $2 and eco friendly while the other product $1.50 but it is not
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environment
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consumers
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looking after which product is the best for the wildlife. While others believe that
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can change but the right
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has to be taken by the leaders. Every day
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do not know enough about how they can be a part of the process to reduce their
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ecological
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union has a solar panel program
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allows each household to apply for a zero interest rate loan but they have to spend that foundation on
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believe it is a great
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should spend more many on
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ecological
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • negative impact
  • extinct
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • habitat destruction
  • mitigate
  • reverse
  • stricter regulations
  • protected areas
  • endangered species
  • education and awareness campaigns
  • biodiversity
  • consequences
  • renewable energy sources
  • organic farming
  • eco-tourism
  • environmental regulations
  • sustainable practices
  • natural ecosystems
  • preserve biodiversity
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