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Many people believe that formal “pen and paper” examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

#people #“pen #paper” #examinations #method #achievement
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 just educational methods have
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 questioned but
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 children development. In
this
 perspective, the traditional educational system does not assess achievement but it is
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This
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behaviorist
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 concepts.
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, it believes that people's
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inteligence
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intelligence
 and productivity could be
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 and forged by the
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environment
 receiving positive and negative reinforcements. In
this
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 obtain
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written
 results
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 of paper, but those words will not reflect what was
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comprehended
 by the
students
. As an
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example
, if
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students
 became nervous, feeling anxiety during a test. That probably will not reflect what they know but what they decorate or was conditioned to write during the test,
however
 will not reflect what he or she introjected about that matters. Another
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drawback
 in traditional educational methods is the castration of
students
 as human beings. They are
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discouraged
 to express themselves and to demonstrate
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 they are becoming during the process.
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 right or wrong, despite
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the child's or teenager's mechanism to create and
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comprehend
comprehended
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 creative way could contain more about the capacity of the student to realize
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connections
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acquisition
 of
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knowledge
 than the strict answer and
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productivity
. I
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completely
 agree with the statement and believe that Paulo Freire was right when he said that the focus of education must be freedom. If there is not, we are creating
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generations
 of robots to reproduce the same old ideas. In my
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 there is
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 resistance against
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 new
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strategies
 and a systemic transformation
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 the fact that include teachers,
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education
dedication
, parents, parenthood and the way we all see the
students
 as
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