Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.  Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Although
It is thought by some that people learn other languages because they want to travel or work in a foreign land in other for them to get free access, Others think that it is not the only reason. I believe learning a new linguistic will broaden one's
language
skill. Learning a different
language
other than your mother tongue will give one free access.
In other words
, the individual will be able to choose from various options.
For example
, a neighbour's son was granted admission to a university in Spain
last
year because he was able to speak Spanish.
This
is to say that he had an advantage over
other student
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from his home country, Nigeria, as
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he is bilingual. While being bilingual is a plus in gaining free access to things, I disagree with
this
view.
On the other hand
, To learn a new
language
Borden's a
persons
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language
skills.
That is
, the individual’s mind is open to other cultures and traditions.
For instance
, Mr John, who teaches French in a secondary, though in Nigeria, can inform his students about the cultural heritage of the French people.
This
is because is
language
skill
is broaden
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as a result
of being bilingual. In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion, I consider broadening
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linguistic skills another reason for learning a foreign
language
.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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