In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What   do you think are the causes of this? • What solutions can you suggest?

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and reading the newspaper is not popular among youngsters in many nations.
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situation is that young
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prefer to use social
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and they do not have enough
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for watching
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and the most viable solution is that
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have to reduce the
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they run between
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. Social
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is the primary reason that adolescents do not prefer to spend their
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watching tv or reading newspapers.
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is to say that it is more convenient to use social
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because everyone has their own device in their pocket.
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to that,
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do not have much
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to sit before the
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and watch 20min program in an hour or reading the newspapers.
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run too many adverts between
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that waste a lot of
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, so they watch their favourite
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on websites.
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, the popularity of
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and newspapers have decreased since the inception of social
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websites.
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, many dramas and shows are uploaded, just after running on
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, on websites
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as Youtube.com or Dailymotion.com without any advertisement. The long term solution to
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situation is that television
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have to reduce the advertisements.
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is because by running too many adverts between
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channels
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will not be able to get the attention of the public.
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, Skysports is a sports channel that used to put a plethora of
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between a Cricket match's overs and their rating got dropped, after that they took the initiative to run fewer
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and their rating went up again. Young
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do not like to read a newspaper or watching
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in many countries. The main reason is that
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do not like to waste their times on
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and they have the alternative in the shape of social
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which is easier to access, the most viable solutions is that
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channels
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have to think about reducing the adverts between
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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