Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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the decision to spend more free time doing volunteer community work,

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of playing computer games and watching movies on the smartphone. I deeply agree that

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kind of activities can definitely help adolescences collect many skills, knowledge and experiences.

To begin

with, teenagers can help local communities do many volunteer activities as they are energetic and willing to learn communication skills and gain valuable experiences. In the nursing home,

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teen can read books, talk about news and walk with elderly teen, assist disabled persons pushing wheelchairs.

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, they should give a hand to the others who are living around them.

Additionally

, There are many juveniles who prefer spending their leisure time on computers and smartphones without face to face interacting with others.

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kind of behaviour may impair teenagers’ psychological health, including unsociability and indifference. When they grow up and earn a living, they may not able to suit society and to fulfil their potentials.

In contrast

, doing volunteer works for the neighbourhood will allow youngsters to confront different teen and learning how to get along with them, to encounter different issues and gain knowledge and skills to address them.

As a result

, It is a positive benefit for teenagers to do unpaid community works. In conclusion, Contributing effort for the community brings many advantages to

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and helps them to establish their goals in the future.