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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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There is a common belief among the general public that there is advised to be specific punishments for certain kind of
crime
 committed; whereas, some state that the occasion and motivation of an illegal action should always be taken into consideration when it comes to
punishment
. From my perspective, these two scenarios have their own benefits which contribute greatly to the safety of the community as well as the power of the justice system. Fixed
punishment
 is beneficial in multiple ways.
Firstly
, a set
punishment
 for a categorized
crime
 can set a strict example to other citizens, warn them against conducting illicit operations.
Therefore
, the
crime
 rate is reduced which can give peace and security to the neighbourhood and the government will be able to take control of the nation effortlessly.
On the other hand
, many’s the time, a
crime
 is accidentally committed due to unwanted reasons
such
 as self-defence. It is undeniable that every culprit should be punished to pay for the wrongdoings they have performed,
however
, there are circumstances that a man has to conduct peril action to protect his human right from bigger threats.
For example
, in 2009, a teacher in the UK killed a terrorist in order to protect her students and colleagues.
Therefore
, actions in those cases should be regarded as an exception and deserved lighter
punishment
 rather than the death penalty. Punishments are set not only to provide security and order to a neighbourhood but
also
 to protect good people.
Therefore
, stable
punishment
 will be served as a good tool for the legal system to secure its citizens,
however
, the circumstance of an individual
crime
 and the motivation of the man who commits is suggested to be taken into account as well.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fixed punishments
  • consistency
  • predictability
  • deter crime
  • potential offenders
  • streamline
  • judicial process
  • bias
  • corruption
  • complexity
  • human behavior
  • circumstances
  • justice system
  • intent
  • remorse
  • socio-economic background
  • rehabilitate offenders
  • recidivism rates
  • flexible punishment systems
  • inconsistencies
  • perceived injustices
  • public trust
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