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Some people fear that technology is gradually taking over control of our lives, while others think that it has led to many positive developments in all aspects of their lives. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people believe that
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 adversely influences our lives and its manipulating aspects take
control
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 of our lifestyle. Others,
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, hold the view that
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 has many benefits to offer to
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humankind.
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 essay discusses both views.
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, I think that
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 will be advantageous as long as we
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 it, and not let it
control
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 us.
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technology
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 has dramatically shaped the way people live, and it is constantly making our life easier. Quite often, tech developers announce innovative tech gadgets that are easy to use, handy, innovative, and life-saving. These devices improve people's lives significantly and we have a better lifestyle today than
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 past due to the improvements and innovations in
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.
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, mobile phones have been improved noticeably in terms of performance and usefulness. Nowadays, they are being used in every aspect of life including paying bills, making contacts, taking notes, surfing the internet and for many other practical purposes. The modern world is indeed defined by modern technologies.
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,
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 does not come without negative consequences. It has already started controlling many of our daily life aspects and can get more catastrophic than anyone could even imagine if it gets out of
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.
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, everybody is using cellular devices these days, so they store their personal photos, contact details and even files on their phones.
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, it is pretty easy for hackers to hack into someone's phone and misuse them. Online transaction fraud, malicious virus and trojans, health hazard, lack of personal and social bonding are
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 attributed to our inclination towards
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. We are meant to
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 the
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, not being controlled by it. In conclusion, even though
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 has its disadvantages, it is undeniable that not everything that the human creates is flawless.
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,
technology
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 can be very handy if it is used properly and under enough precaution. So, we should be in
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 of
technology
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, not let it
control
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 us.

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