Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue that is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Selfbelief is an important virtue anyone can
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and which
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a person
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think in difficult instances and
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it helps people to get to
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of the problem and find
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a solution
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for the same.
Hence
my essay going forward will narrate
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how one accepts the situations and does nothing while the others
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to get in detail and looks for the solution.
To begin
with, pupil often
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into
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where they are not able to get out of it and leave their faith
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destiny. It is their belief, that you have to pass through difficult times to reach
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greater heights and they accept it.
For example
, Executive trust his
hardwork
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hard work
and patients will lead him to
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a managerial
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job in the future which
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in turn
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will result in increases
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remunerations
over the course of time.
On the contrary
, individuals who are looking to improve their growth always find a new way to tackle the condition constantly and more so by doing that they learn new skills which increases their value. They
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don't
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in just going through
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and try to defy the odds by taking up multiple opportunities which
also
enhances their problem stalking abilities.
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, A single father will work on
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multiple jobs to attain the needs
school
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, medicare, food and shelter for his
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children
childrens
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. In my honest opinion, It is important to face the issues
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and not just give
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it
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. In
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today's
today
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world
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tough work is as important as smart work to rise above the ranks and by doing so it automatically starts reflecting your
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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