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Some individuals argue people should buy only local products rather than foreign products. do you agree or disagree

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Some individuals argue
people
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 should buy only local
products
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 rather than foreign
products
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. In my opinion, I personally disagree with
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 opinion because it could lead to many disadvantages for any
country
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's progress, so
people
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 should not limit themselves to locally made things. The essay will
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 discuss points with appropriate examples to demonstrate and elaborate on the argument in the upcoming paragraphs.
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 with, the most indispensable fact,
people
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 could get anything even it is not available in their own
country
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 because it is the most common situation countries are limited with their geographical barriers and unable to impart raw materials for all type of productions.
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, Canada's climate does not allow to grow of cotton that's why the
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 imports clothes from other nations.
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, it is concluded that buying
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 from other land provide them with the variety even it is not available in their local places.
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, importing things from other nations put a spectacular and significant impact on the
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's economy because globalization makes it "a piece of cake" for all nations to trade and robust their economies. When an exporter
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 exports; it's stock to the host
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 and the exporter has to pay a decent amount as GST to the importer
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, which amounts counted as an income source.
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, Australia exports wine to China and
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 paying the GST on it;
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 trade generates income for the Chinese economy. If
people
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 in China would stop to buy Australian wine, could create a hugely detrimental impact on their economy. Because it would create a massive economic impact on their
country
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, they should
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 buy foreign commodities. In conclusion, whereas buying things, which made from other countries, impart us the variety, might not accessible locally, but
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 plays a crucial role to build a healthy economical structure for our countries;
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,
people
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 should buy locally made
products
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 but
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 keep buying international
products
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 as well.
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