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Some individuals argue people should buy only local products rather than foreign products. do you agree or disagree

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Some individuals argue
people
 should buy only local
products
 rather than foreign
products
. In my opinion, I personally disagree with
this
 opinion because it could lead to many disadvantages for any
country
's progress, so
people
 should not limit themselves to locally made things. The essay will
further
 discuss points with appropriate examples to demonstrate and elaborate on the argument in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
 with, the most indispensable fact,
people
 could get anything even it is not available in their own
country
 because it is the most common situation countries are limited with their geographical barriers and unable to impart raw materials for all type of productions.
For example
, Canada's climate does not allow to grow of cotton that's why the
country
 imports clothes from other nations.
Therefore
, it is concluded that buying
products
 from other land provide them with the variety even it is not available in their local places.
Furthermore
, importing things from other nations put a spectacular and significant impact on the
country
's economy because globalization makes it "a piece of cake" for all nations to trade and robust their economies. When an exporter
country
 exports; it's stock to the host
country
 and the exporter has to pay a decent amount as GST to the importer
country
, which amounts counted as an income source.
For instance
, Australia exports wine to China and
also
 paying the GST on it;
this
 trade generates income for the Chinese economy. If
people
 in China would stop to buy Australian wine, could create a hugely detrimental impact on their economy. Because it would create a massive economic impact on their
country
, they should
also
 buy foreign commodities. In conclusion, whereas buying things, which made from other countries, impart us the variety, might not accessible locally, but
also
 plays a crucial role to build a healthy economical structure for our countries;
nevertheless
,
people
 should buy locally made
products
 but
also
 keep buying international
products
 as well.
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