The best way to solve environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
it is a debatable topic that
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raise
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fuel
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increasing
although
the price is high in some region.India has high
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a high
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fuel
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industries
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use
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of
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about
cost
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countries
people
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distance
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