The best way to solve environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

it is a debatable topic that
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the
cost
of fossil
fuel
may protect the
enviornment
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environment
from
the
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pollution.
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essay will discuss how
people
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glabal
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global
warming to protect our ecosystem on the one hand in
this
modern
world
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the number of
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vehicle
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are
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drastically increasing and the emission of carbon dioxide is higher comparing with the past days.
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emmited
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carbon dioxide would accumulate in the atmosphere eventually it may lead to several health issues as well as it will
adversly
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the climate.For
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instace
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the biggest typhoon happened in
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of America due to global warming.The consumption of fossil
fuel
is
inreasing
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increasing
dramatically
although
the price is high in some region.India has
high
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cost
for
the
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fuel
however
still
people
are buying new vehicles day by day,
moreover
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the industries and factories are producing
high
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amount of pollution.
on the other hand
,in my
opinion
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people
should start to
use
the
electrical
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vehicle to drive.It will never pollute the
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environment
.Not only that the
cost
will be less
comparing
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to
the
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fossil fuels.
Also
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other kind
energies
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should
use
for the
indstries
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industries
it may provide the best future for our new generation.
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Ageing
and cancerous diseases are uncountable in the present world.To control the sickness the government should take the
intiative
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initiative
,either the number of vehicles should decrease or the best
alterantive
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alternative
have to
be introduce
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to the world.Developed and educated countries like Norway and Finland
they
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use
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their
bicycles to go to
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their
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.I think
people
should be
educated
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the seriousness behind the
use
of fuels. To conclude I completely disagree
for
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the statement
of
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increasing the
cost
of
fuel
.It will help only the countries with
fuel
production and gradually the consumer
countires
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countries
will get underdeveloped.The best way
people
should
use
their bicycles for
the
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travelling despite long
disctance
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distance
distances
.
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