Write a letter to the local authorities for requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area 1. Mention about the current facilities available 2. What kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced 3. How the new sports facilities would be a help for the people in your age group

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing
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letter in regards to request you to provide new sports facilities in our Corniche area,especially for teenagers. I am thankful to the local government and municipality for providing wonderful walking, jogging and cycling track along with a manual gym in the Corniche. Those are not only helping adults maintaining their health and spending quality time, but
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kids are enjoying riding their
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there. I admire that your support and focus on sports will help residents. I would like to request you for some new places for the sports,
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as badminton and basketball courts in the public garden near to our area. These games are mainly followed by adolescents. There are few spots in the park, where these facilities can be installed easily without hurting the decorum of the place. Teenagers will not only spend quality time there, but it will be beneficial for their physical and mental health.
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there will be less crowd,
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in the evening, most of the people are waiting for their turn to use the cycling track. Yours faithfully Vishal
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Amenities
  • Community center
  • Recreational activities
  • Wellness
  • Physical fitness
  • Athletic pursuits
  • Leisure
  • Cardiovascular health
  • Mental well-being
  • Social cohesion
  • Multi-generational
  • Inclusivity
  • Public spaces
  • Green spaces
  • Accessibility
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