Education and health care should be funded by the government and free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is often argued that the
government
authorities should provide health
medical facilities
and learning provisions without any cost to the public. While
this
trend has some drawbacks, I believe that it would be very beneficial for human beings as well as
the nation
's growth.
To begin
with, there are various effects that would come when the government
provides free education
and health
care, which would be resulted
in a very bad way. To elaborateWrong verb form
result
it
, as Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
health
facilities
are very expensive these days, if these would be
free the public of any particular Wrong verb form
were
nation
does
not quit Verb problem
would
from
their harmful habits Change preposition
apply
such
as they do not quit from their smoking or drinking habits which are harmful to their health
. Moreover
, if a vast amount of money
will
Verb problem
is
spend
on Wrong verb form
spent
health
or schooling, the government
do not look at the nation
's development clearly. For instance
, an article published by "Hindustan Times" showed that the government
of India allocates 60% of their economy to health
care and free education
which gives
a negative impact on the cities of India.
Despite some drawbacks of free Verb problem
has
education
or health
care, there are several positive sides to that phenomenon on
the individuals Change preposition
for
as well as
the country. Firstly
, if all the schooling provisions free
, it would be very beneficial for those people who do not have enough Add a missing verb
are free
money
to afford expenses for their juvenile 's
studies, they would have a chance to secure their future. Change noun form
juvenile
Furthermore
, as youngsters are considered as a nation
's backbone, consequently
, they would help to increase the country 's economy by achieving their desire
goals and Replace the word
desired
this
thing also
boast
the literacy rate of the country. Correct subject-verb agreement
boasts
Secondly
, in this
modern there are many kinds of critical diseases that are developed, which costs
a very Wrong verb form
cost
higher
amount of Correct word choice
high
money
to deal with it
, Correct pronoun usage
apply
consequently
, free medical facilities
would help poor or needy people to cope up
with Change preposition
apply
that
harmful diseases. Correct determiner usage
those
Therefore
, it is necessary for the authorities to give these kinds of provision
to the whole society.
Fix the agreement mistake
provisions
To conclude
, although
this
trend has some drawbacks for the nations such
as a large amount of money
for the education
and health
sector, I believe that this
phenomenon has several positive sides on
human beings Change preposition
for
such
as free education
and good health
facilities
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