Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind the bars. To what extend do you agree ?

Crime

is a pervasive problem in most

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countries around the world. Despite the penalties like incarceration and life imprisonment, prisoners

tries

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to

reoffend

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re-offend

offend

. Post comprehending the trend, many people believe that some offenders, must be asked to do an unpaid

job

instead

of putting them into

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jail, to teach them a lesson.

However

, I opine against

this

statement.

Although

, a lion's share of the crowd contends that, by making the prisoners

to

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do a community

job

with no

renumeration

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remuneration

as

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, their punishment sentence can help us to curb the

crime

. As nobody likes to do a

job

free cost and still if, someone has to do it, like cleaning roads or office toilets etc. they are going to regret it, every moment while performing their assigned

job

.

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they will be living a sort of normal life as they will be around the civilians all the time.

In addition

to it, every criminal case is not the same, the

instensity

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intensity

of

henious

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heinous

act varies, so we cannot think of making murders or

theives

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thieves

to get away from what they did to the victim, by just servicing state for few months.

Hence

, assigning

job

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for reducing

crime

and giving justice to the victim and affected families is not an appropriate approach.

Therefore

, in order to keep

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faith

the

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judicial system, all cases ought to be analyzed

seperatly

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separately

the way it is usually done. All the murders and the rapiest should be taken behind the bars, so that correct justice can be accomplished.

For instance

, if, a strict punishment like

death

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sentence, if given to one rapiest, it will serve as a threat and set an example for those who are thinking of committing it. To conclude, the way

crime

is soaring drastically, I firmly believe that

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it is significant to take stringent actions against the

wrong doing

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to curb the

crime

instead

of giving unpaid jobs to the criminals.