Some people think that public libraries are necessary, while others believe that nowadays public libraries are no longer important. What is your opinion.

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public reading rooms are losing their importance among
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generation and they prefer electronic
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gadgets
to read.
Nevertheless
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that these places are playing
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part in everyone's life, either students or
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people.
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a concrete decision. On the one hand,
libraries
are
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unique source of getting relief and spending time to gain knowledge through
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range of books. To elaborate
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has different choices about reading materials to stay away from
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stress
and anxiety. To illustrate, many professional people spend their weekend in the library to attain relaxation while reading general or
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adventure
books.
Besides
this
,
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even though
masses are able to search any book through an online facility,
libraries
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would like to read
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different kind of books, while
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other readers to enhance their
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awareness
.
Therefore
,
libraries
must be developed to keep ourselves updated.
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notions against the establishment of
libraries
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diminishing the standard of these places is that the provided materials in the
libraries
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and nor any authority or social groups
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to provide
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editions to public
libraries
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Secondly
, owing to lack of time, families like to spend quality time
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together
during weekends or holidays
instead
of joining any local reading place.
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these
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homes are dropping their importance due to lack of government and public involvement. To
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public
libraries
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role in human being life in various ways.
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Nonetheless
, fast and paced technology has overwhelmed
this
past trend of keeping ourselves active and in
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further
future
it might be eradicated
this
facility if the related authority would not take steps in present to preserve the
libraries
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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