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Some people think that sports played in teams are better than individual sports. Others don’t think so. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #sports #teams #don’t
Different sports
has
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their
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different playing rules. While some are
practiced
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 within a group of members, there are others
which
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 are played with only one
person
 in
field
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the field
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. At
present
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 there is an opinion that being in
activites
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activities
 with a
team
 is better than being a lone wolf. Personally, I happily go with
this
 view,
however
, forthcoming paragraphs will shed light on both viewpoints. Performing in teams can help an individual to develop certain skills that are not possible to
upbring
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bring
 in
single player
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 sports. It teaches you how to act in front of a crowd constituting people of different behavioural traits. All the members get to know about confiding in each other while aiming
on
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 a single goal. When you are in a
team
, most importantly, at victorious times you will have someone around you to celebrate just as in hard times you will have each other's back.
Nonetheless
, all of
this
 is not as easy as it seems, to get
this
 done co-ordination coupled with understanding are two key skills essentially required in an efficient
team
.
On the other
hand
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single player
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 sports have their own
benfits
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benefits
 and setbacks. As in these
activites
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activities
 individual is not dependent on anyone else, he/she can accentuate the skills easily by
practicing
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 against the clock.
Furthermore
, the popularity gains will be only in
account
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 of that
person
 seen in the field. Professionally,
this
 is quite beneficial for an athlete,
however
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 personally it is not, due to the fact that during
ups
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 and downs of life you always
needs
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 someone to help you out. To summarise, I would just say that people have contrasting views. While some see advantages in teams, others see in performing alone. According to my eyes, being in a
team
 is always better as it teaches a
person
 how to become good at relationships, which in turn benefits the
person
 for
thier
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their
 whole life.
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