Some people believe that celebrating personal events is a waste of money. Others feel that these celebrations play an important role in the lives of individuals and in society as a whole. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is undeniable fact that in
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modern-era keeping feast at various social
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is arranged to bring relatives or friends together.
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,
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ceremony causes momentary pleasure in all party familiar persons
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immense money is wasted in
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celebration. In
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the upcoming
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essay, I discuss both the views and
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reach
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the
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conclusion.
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, how these celebrations play
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role in individual lives.
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, one parent arranges
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small party and invite all the relatives to feast on their son’s 10th birthday
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hometown after staying up late abroad. No doubt all their friends and relatives will rejuvenate after
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party, give blessing to
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lovely family for their success.
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, celebrations at various occasions for different social
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can cause tremendous happiness in known
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members and resultantly plays
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vital role in
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which is discussed henceforth with talking about effects of it on other surrounding persons.
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, what effects will occur
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this
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occasion celebration
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Celebration
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The celebration
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is never completed without eating, music, decoration and many more. All the respective persons of various trades have been benefited
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social gathering which can cause contentment in them as well.
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, as mentioned in
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no one can deny that there is
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a waste
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of money; but it is only
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the family who arranging
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ceremony remaining
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get enormous advantages.
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, to sum up I opine that occasional social
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should be arranged.
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enormous money has been spent
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on
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these
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, it is helpful to
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society
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well-being as well as benefit
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poor people.
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, how much spending
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these
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depends on
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an individual’s
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financial capacity. So, it must arrange wisely.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • lavish parties
  • essential expenditures
  • financial stress
  • lasting memories
  • social bonds
  • emotional support
  • familial and social ties
  • mental health
  • community cohesion
  • cultural heritage
  • sense of identity
  • traditional practices
  • sense of belonging
  • continuity
  • unique cultural aspects
  • personal well-being
  • routine
  • life satisfaction
  • reasonable budget
  • cost-effective
  • potluck parties
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