In some countries, young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard on their studies. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
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time
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.
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school
pressure on teenagers. Use synonyms
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First
one is that competition is getting tough among people. Parents want their Correct article usage
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children
to succeed in their studies. They put restrictions on them for going out and let them stay focused on their Use synonyms
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tuition
For example
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This
leads to disease like depression, anxiety and compelled to take wrong decisions like suicide. In India, Many young Linking Words
children
suicide after they fail their exams. Use synonyms
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Second
reason is that many teachers give too much Add an article
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home work
to students, so, they can not get rest and keep doing their work. If they Correct your spelling
homework
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do not
don't
then
they get punished or Linking Words
embrassed
in classrooms which Correct your spelling
embarrassed
affects
their personality. Due to spending their excessive Change the verb form
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time
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skills
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and confidence. In Use synonyms
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a few
school
work is vital to Use synonyms
live
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living
life
happily rather than putting pressure of brainstorming upon young kids.
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However
, to reduce Linking Words
this
problem, some dominant actions should be taken on Linking Words
time
before it gets worse. Use synonyms
Firstly
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Parents
should let their Correct your spelling
parents
children
enjoy the beautiful evenings or a part of the day with their age mates. They should make them free to play games and spend spare Use synonyms
of
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apply
time
with Use synonyms
acitivites
they want to do. Correct your spelling
activities
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could help them to grow better and learn Linking Words
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real-life
life
facts Use synonyms
through
communicating with their family and friends. Verify preposition usage
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Government
should establish some fun activity schools for young Add an article
The government
children
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such
as swimming centres, playgrounds, and dance institutes. Only Linking Words
school
learning is not enough for toddlers to develop their Use synonyms
skills
. These kind of fun Use synonyms
actitivies
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activities
are
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are also mattered
also
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alot
in Correct your spelling
a lot
life
to progress. Use synonyms
For instance
: In Canada, there are fixed hours for study, fun Linking Words
acitivities
and freedom for spending Correct your spelling
activities
time
in whatever they want to. In these ways, Use synonyms
children
's minds develop stronger, find their real meanings of living and start figuring out their goals.
To conclude, it is true that at many places of the globe young Use synonyms
school
students spend their whole Use synonyms
time
by working hard on their Use synonyms
schools
tasks without having rest. They are pressurized by parents and teacher both which leads them to take harsh steps and lost other Change to a genitive case
school's
schools'
skills
important for Use synonyms
life
. If some crucial steps should be taken to tackle Use synonyms
this
problem, Linking Words
then
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life
will be better.Use synonyms
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