Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages, and, if so, how?

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english

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is an international

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and it is spoken all over the world.

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has been a compulsory subject in schools

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because if it is not taught at

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age, students will find

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of problem in practical life. In my opinion, it's important to learn at

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the importance of learning

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english

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is that all internet, social media, digital media is mostly in

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and if one can not understand it, how would he be able to keep

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updated. After that, it is

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important in businesses area as well. Many of the top

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companies that are running, and even private companies as well,

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as a way of communication and with the help of

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you would have more chance to get a job opportunity.

, there are so so many students who want to study abroad but almost all top Universities from well know countries for education like UK, USA, Canada and Australia require an

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certificate to apply for

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admission.

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, if someone wants to study remotely like online courses or degrees, they can not pursue it without having the knowledge of

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. To sum up, it's very important to teach

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early

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stage, because there are so many things that would be able to create problems at some point

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children's practical life, either if someone is willing to travel, apply for a job or wants to study abroad.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages, and, if so, how?

Fully explain your ideas

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parently individuals become as busy as expected to take care of ageing people.these days humans don't have sufficient time to look after their parents. this essay will raise some problems and solutions.

Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions. Do you agree or disagree?

Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead going directly to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages.

Some people think that the government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children. While other people think it is the fault of the parents. Discuss both side and give your opinion

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding the changes. Others, however think that changes is always a good thing. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.