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The popularity of dead languages such as Latin and ancient Greek in schools is declining, as many people consider their study to be a waste of time and funding. How does the study of dead languages add to academic and personal development? Why might some people feel that funds could be better allocated?

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Why do you learn foreign
languages
? Maybe to feel more connected to people around the world, to improve your travel experience or to immerse yourself in a different culture from your own.These are dead
languages
 - those that no longer have a native speaker. Latin is probably the most studied of the dead
languages
. That's because it was taught in educational institutions, because of its importance in the Christian Church, and because it was often used in legal or political situations. Many of the words used in scientific fields were derived from the ancient
Greek
language
, and the technological industries are following suit. If you work in these industries, learning the
language
 would be an interesting way to
further
 explore your field and understand the origins of the terms you use every day. If you are interested in learning Ancient
Greek
, it would help you with modern
languages
such
 as Modern
Greek
.Learning a dead
language
,
such
 as Latin or Ancient
Greek
, can help you learn other
languages
 more easily; - it gives you a window into history that you just don't get from modern
languages
; - academic or professional advantages, meaning you can have a significant career advancement; - you can read ancient texts as they were meant to be read, in their original
language
; - you gain a greater connection with history and different cultures. Perhaps
languages
 that have become extinct can reclaim their place in modern society. Whatever the case may be, I can say that ancient
languages
 contribute to the development
,
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 and expansion of the knowledge of all mankind.
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