In the past people used to live their entire life in one place. Nowadays they live in several different places during their life. What are the reasons for this change? Is it a positive or a negative trend?

Comper to the past in the present age
people
are moving
various
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places to
living
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live
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in their
life time
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lifetime
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. The reason can be work
releated
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related
or they can not
affor
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afford
to buy a
house
and
sattle
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settle
cattle
down.
This
can
cose
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cause
several problems
such
as loneliness and overpopulation in the big
cityes
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cities
. Oldest time
people
was living in the same city or even
a
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the
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same
house
in their entire life. A few
decade
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decades
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ago properties
was
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were
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more affordable and they
easealy
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easily
find a local
job
so young
people
could buy a
house
in
their
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the
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early period of their life wich
automaticaly
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automatically
lead them to
sattle
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settle
battle
Seattle
downd
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down
downed
. They usually
chosed
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choose
chosen
chose
to live close to
ther
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their
the
loved ones so the
familly
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family
could stay together. Nowadays
world
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the world
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are
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is
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differente
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different
because If
you
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areyou
wereyou
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born in
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country
county
counrty
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the counrty
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side, you probably
sufferring
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suffering
to find a
job
not even buy a
house
.
Young
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The young
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generation
are
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is
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moving
for
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to
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big
cityes
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cities
becaus
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because
their hopping for a better
lifestye
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lifestyle
however
it is not coming for free. They are far
a way
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away
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from their
fammily
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family
which can lead to depression. Even though they can get a better
job
, they have to deal with a higher level of stress. In conclusion, oldest time
people
could buy a
house
in their young age so they have no
reasone
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reason
for
move
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a move
the move
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to
an
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apply
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another place while in these days young
people
haveing
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having
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difficulties to find a
well paid
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well-paid
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job
in smaller
cityesand
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cities and
buy a
house
.
That is
why young
people
are
moveing
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moving
more than
a
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the
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previous generation.
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