In many countries today crime novels and Tv crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?
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crime
novels and TV crime
dramas has
gained popularity in many countries these days as Change the verb form
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they
shows
the unknown world to a common person.These type of novels and shows keeps us curious throughout the reading process. Correct subject-verb agreement
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adapt
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According to
me these books and TVshows
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TV shows
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become popular Correct subject-verb agreement
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due to
the anxiety and curiosity that develops during the process.The population will be aware of the crime
activities that Replace the word
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happens
around them and may be precautious.Change the verb form
happen
On the other
hand
the people would Add a comma
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also
learn these actions and would try to implement in
their lives.Correct pronoun usage
them in
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like women,Fix the agreement mistake
populations
children
and people with mental disturbance
should avoid watching it.The Fix the agreement mistake
disturbances
children
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it has
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an easy target for Wrong verb form
become
the
kids to misbehave especially in schools. A teacher was attacked by a knife in school by a student because she scolded him for misbehaving in the class and the child was sentenced to punishment by the police.Correct article usage
apply
Therefore
these kinds of TV shows should be restricted from children
It can also
be explained to them that these actions are not always true they are imaginative. My opinion regarding crime
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fiction
crime
dramas should be interesting with limitation
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limitations
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I love to read and watch these shows as it makes us curious about the next event .But Correct your spelling
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still
I don’t encourage the violence part of it .Sometimes I read a couple of Add a comma
still,
crime
fictions
in full swing and it happens once in a blue moon. Fix the agreement mistake
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Finally
to conclude
with the above topic this
novels and shows are interesting if it is dramatic and explained properly Correct determiner usage
these
children
should be restricted .There should be age restrictions and limitations.At the end of the show
the law must be briefed Add a comma
show,
accordingly
.The commencement of the show should announce that it is imaginative or truth
people should believe Replace the word
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an entertainment.Correct pronoun usage
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