Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’ How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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cars

have increased highly over the past three decades. Many cities around the world are now “

one

big

traffic

jam

”. It is indisputable that

traffic

jam

is the major problem in various countries because no

one

can deny that

cars

are the most convenient vehicles for travelling in nowadays.

However

, I think

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governments

should

concerns

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about

this

problem and promote some policies

for

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reduce

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the

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traffic

problems.

First

of all, I think that

this

statement is clearly true. Many cities around the

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are become

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the “

traffic

jam

city

”.

For example

, Bangkok which is the capital

city

in Thailand is now facing

with

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the problems of

traffic

jam

. Many

city

-dwellers need to schedule their time for

traveling

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to some places due to the

traffic

problems

especially

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in the rush hours. Thai people mostly use their own

cars

to travel rather than public transports.

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less extent, the infrastructure of roads in Thailand are complicated and not well organized.

This

is why Thailand becomes

one

of the most

traffic

jam

city

in the world.

Nevertheless

,

the

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governments

can discourage people from using their

cars

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encourage

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them to use

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public transportations.

For instance

, the

governments

should improve the quality of public transports in the

city

by extended the routes to reach every destination around the

city

or invested

for

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high-speed trains (BTS and MRT) and quality buses.

Moreover

, the

governments

can establish the policy of

cars

owning restriction

such

as

one

car per

one

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family. In conclusion, there are many solutions that

governments

can do to reduce the

traffic

jam

in the metropolitan cities and I believed that

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effective transportation can reduce

this

problem in the long terms.