Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’ How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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have increased highly over the past three decades. Many cities around the world are now “

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big

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”. It is indisputable that

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is the major problem in various countries because no

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can deny that

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are the most convenient vehicles for travelling in nowadays.

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about

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problem and promote some policies

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problems.

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of all, I think that

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statement is clearly true. Many cities around the

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the “

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jam

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city

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”.

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, Bangkok which is the capital

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in Thailand is now facing

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the problems of

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. Many

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-dwellers need to schedule their time for

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to some places due to the

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problems

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in the rush hours. Thai people mostly use their own

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to travel rather than public transports.

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less extent, the infrastructure of roads in Thailand are complicated and not well organized.

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is why Thailand becomes

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of the most

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in the world.

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governments

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can discourage people from using their

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them to use

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public transportations.

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, the

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should improve the quality of public transports in the

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by extended the routes to reach every destination around the

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or invested

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high-speed trains (BTS and MRT) and quality buses.

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, the

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can establish the policy of

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owning restriction

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family. In conclusion, there are many solutions that

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can do to reduce the

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in the metropolitan cities and I believed that

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effective transportation can reduce

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problem in the long terms.