Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Reading is an art as well as
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part of
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children's
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developmental
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develop
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children
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.
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people
believe that kids can read
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online,in my
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a kid should start reading habits with the help of
books
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both types of reading activity in children. on the one hand,from the ancient days onwards people are
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reading
by
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books
.The new generation does not have the time to read the
books
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materials
have some drawbacks including
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vision problems.The little eyes get damaged when they focus
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the digital screens.
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there is
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to divert their mind to
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For instance
,if I give a tablet with
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book to my kid,he would just read for
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minutes
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he will start to play the games
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phone
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.There is
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chance to divert the mind form the reading material.
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online reading,people do not need to carry a heavy book with their hands.It is
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and possible read anywhere.
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while travelling
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bus or car the kids can read it.
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it is
enviornmental
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environmental
friendly
also
people can download the
books
and keep in the phone or tablet
then
they can read offline anytime.
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to that no need to have additional lighting to read
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online, because the phone itself has the brightness.Not only that online
books
are
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expensive as real
books
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also
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place to store the
books
in the house.
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there should be a special shelf to store the
books
. To conclude.even there is may advantages
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be seen in
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reading system.I still recommend
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books
.Because it will give some nostalgic
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memories
in
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their
future life as
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their
elders
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been experienced in the past.Perhaps our future will be
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the paperless
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world,
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during
that time
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period
,kids can memorise the authentic reading materials.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • online reading materials
  • printed materials
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • technology
  • convenience
  • interactivity
  • accessibility
  • visual appeal
  • physical books
  • parental guidance
  • digital skills
  • screen time
  • learning experience
  • personal preference
  • comprehension
  • critical thinking
  • creativity
  • word recognition
  • grammar
  • vocabulary development
  • reading habits
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