Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Reading is an art as well as

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part of

childrens

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children's

children

develomental

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developmental

stage,reading can

devleop

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develop

the knowledge

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children

childrens

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children

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some

pople

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people

believe that kids can read

through

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apply

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online,in my

opinion

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a kid should start reading habits with the help of

books

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essay will discuss

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both types of reading activity in children. on the one hand,from the ancient days onwards people are

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reading

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books

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.The new generation does not have the time to read the

books

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. The online

materails

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materials

have some drawbacks including

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vision problems.The little eyes get damaged when they focus

long

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time

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the digital screens.

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Moreover

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there is

chance

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to divert their mind to

another online games

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,if I give a tablet with

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book to my kid,he would just read for

few

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minutes

then

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he will start to play the games

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phone

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.There is

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chance to divert the mind form the reading material.

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online reading,people do not need to carry a heavy book with their hands.It is

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handle

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and possible read anywhere.

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particular

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while travelling

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bus or car the kids can read it.

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Furthermore

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it is

enviornmental

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environmental

friendly

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people can download the

books

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and keep in the phone or tablet

then

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they can read offline anytime.

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to that no need to have additional lighting to read

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online, because the phone itself has the brightness.Not only that online

books

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are

not

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expensive as real

books

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also

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no need to find

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place to store the

books

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in the house.

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Otherwise

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there should be a special shelf to store the

books

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. To conclude.even there is may advantages

can

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be seen in

online

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the online

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reading system.I still recommend

to read

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reading

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apply

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books

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.Because it will give some nostalgic

memmories

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memories

thier

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their

future life as

thier

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their

elders

has

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been experienced in the past.Perhaps our future will be

paperless

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the paperless

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world,

dusring

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during

that time

periode

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period

,kids can memorise the authentic reading materials.

margushobi

Mar 9, 2021

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Topic Vocabulary:

online reading materials
printed materials
advantages
disadvantages
technology
convenience
interactivity
accessibility
visual appeal
physical books
parental guidance
digital skills
screen time
learning experience
personal preference
comprehension
critical thinking
creativity
word recognition
grammar
vocabulary development
reading habits

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