Many people believe that it is the responsibility of first world nations to help other countries. Others, however, feel that these countries have their own problems and should help themselves first. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In today's

world

, it is believed by some part of a population that the most developed

countries

should help other

regions

to grow. Despite

this

fact,

others

consider that these

regions

have their own issues and they should help themselves in the

first

place

.

Firstly

,

this

essay will discuss the

first

opinion and,

secondly

, it will analyse the

second

opinion.

To begin

with, on the one hand, if industrially strong

regions

will give their help to weaker societies it is likely to balance the

economy

of the

world

and improve living conditions all over the

world

.

This

is because of the fact that not only do the

first

world

nations have technologies and money to fund other

countries

' inventions but

also

they can build their factories in these poorer

regions

in

order

to create job vacancies.

Therefore

, if places with a low economic activity receive aid from

others

they might get a chance to improve their

economy

and standards of living

,

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and increase their GDP.

For example

, in the year 2010 Zanzibar, a city in Africa, obtained funding from some European

countries

to build schools and hospitals.

However

,

on the other hand

, these

countries

might have their own problems and should help themselves

first

. The main reason for

this

is that not only does an industrial country have obstacles and complicated situations but

also

if

this

place

uses all resources to help other

regions

it might be extremely hard to cope with issues inside the borders.

As a result

, the

first

world

nations should think about themselves in the

first

place

in

order

not to have any downturns and recessions.

For instance

, some researchers claim that if powerful

regions

only help

others

to grow it might lead to a significant fall in the state of the

economy

. Eventually, to conclude, on the one side, strong nations can help

others

to develop and grow by providing funding that, in turn, might improve the

economy

and standards of living in poorer

regions

.

However

, it might be beneficial for

such

countries

to care for themselves in the

first

place

in

order

not to have a recession. In my opinion, it might be better if strong

regions

give their aid to weaker societies in

order

to balance the

world

economy

and enhance standards of living.