Many people believe that it is the responsibility of first world nations to help other countries. Others, however, feel that these countries have their own problems and should help themselves first. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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, it is believed by some part of a population that the most developed

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should help other

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to grow. Despite

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fact,

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consider that these

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have their own issues and they should help themselves in the

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opinion and,

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with, on the one hand, if industrially strong

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will give their help to weaker societies it is likely to balance the

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of the

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and improve living conditions all over the

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is because of the fact that not only do the

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nations have technologies and money to fund other

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' inventions but

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they can build their factories in these poorer

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in

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to create job vacancies.

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, if places with a low economic activity receive aid from

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they might get a chance to improve their

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and standards of living

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and increase their GDP.

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, in the year 2010 Zanzibar, a city in Africa, obtained funding from some European

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to build schools and hospitals.

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, these

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might have their own problems and should help themselves

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. The main reason for

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is that not only does an industrial country have obstacles and complicated situations but

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if

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uses all resources to help other

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it might be extremely hard to cope with issues inside the borders.

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, the

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nations should think about themselves in the

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in

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not to have any downturns and recessions.

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, some researchers claim that if powerful

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only help

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to grow it might lead to a significant fall in the state of the

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. Eventually, to conclude, on the one side, strong nations can help

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to develop and grow by providing funding that, in turn, might improve the

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and standards of living in poorer

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.

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, it might be beneficial for

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countries

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to care for themselves in the

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in

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not to have a recession. In my opinion, it might be better if strong

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give their aid to weaker societies in

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to balance the

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economy

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and enhance standards of living.