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Many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities. Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages ?

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Youth
 have recently been migrating from villages to
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areas
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 the search for better education and
employment
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 development has both advantages and disadva
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, in that it has brought them better job
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, but it has exposed them to
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 lia r hardships. Looking
first
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employment
 as compared to the villages. Reputed
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 national
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 allow
people
 to be employed in well paid and secure jobs .
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 not be possible
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, where access to jobs is a major challenge.
For instance
,
people
 who were limited to only seasonal work in
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l
areas
 were able to find
employment
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such
 as Google when moving to urban
areas
such
 as Bangalore.
Thus
,
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 to
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 opens doors for
people
 that are
otherwise
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be
 in the villages.
On the other hand
, a move to the city offers its own share of setbacks. The younger
people
 who were looked after by an elder are suddenly responsible for themselves.They now need to cook, clean, and pay their own electricity and phone bills. Though these tasks may not seem complicated, a lot of young
people
 take a while to get used to perform ing them efficiently. So, when moving to the city, the
youth
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initially
. In conclusion, the
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 of
youth
 from remote
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u rban
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 comes with both benefits and drawbacks. The
youth
 have better
employment
 options, but at the same
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 stage of settling into
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 life can unsettle them as well.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Migration
  • Urbanization
  • Educational institutions
  • Job prospects
  • Wages
  • Economic growth
  • Cultural exchange
  • Overpopulation
  • Cost of living
  • Rural depopulation
  • Social isolation
  • Traditional values
  • Personal growth
  • Recreational activities
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