It is not necessary for people to travel to other places to learn about the culture. We can learn as much as from books, films, and the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, an increasing number of
people
are concerned about
culture
exportation methods. Whether we should discover
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culture
from
books
or maybe experience “
culture
shock” by travel is a controversial issue. I agree with the point that we should expand our understanding of
culture
by
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when
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have sufficient funds.
First
, it is obvious that
culture
expand is a feeling of cognition.
Books
and movies are loaded with edited information which is hard for a reader to understand the whole picture.
For example
, before I went to
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Rift Valley, I was not so impressed since
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I bought describe it as “a gigantic scare of mother planet”. It was after I found out how magnificent the view was and realized that I was misled really.
Moreover
, internet feeds and other sources are not helping when
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wish to know the taste of
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authentic food which are
also
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significant part of
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the culture
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.
Hence
, when travel fees are enough, maybe
people
should try it themselves locally. Indeed, while travel locally there might be some unexpected side effects, unnecessary expenses
for instance
.
People
might
also
face safety issues or attracted by the
culture
on
books
in the
first
place but found out they hate about it later which bring back to my point that
books
and news feeds are processed,
second
-handed information that might not send
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a comprehensive massage. Variety sources of information will provide part of the experience.
However
, when you immerse yourself in another
culture
you will learn things that you cannot through other means. To summarize my point of view above which are the way
people
think and respond to foreign
culture
cannot be learned online thereby they should experience
culture
shock all by
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.
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  • cultural immersion
  • authentic experiences
  • diverse perspectives
  • comprehensive
  • historical context
  • facilitates
  • sensory and emotional depth
  • holistic understanding
  • cultural bias
  • stereotypes
  • discernment
  • virtual reality
  • convenience of access
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