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Some people argue that children more often do physical activities while sparing less time for studying? To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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controversial
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 issue about what the
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 spend their
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 on . On top of
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 some
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 believe that attaching more importance to somatic
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 should be
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 part of their daily
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, others claim that learning their school lessons have to be an essential component of spending their
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. As for me, the balance of both physical actions and studying can be ensured by youth
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 because it can not be denied that the aforementioned two different
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 offer
children
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 to decent future
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 the aforementioned issues,
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 with how physical efficiency
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 the quality of their
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. The
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 thing is that if they allocate more
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 for
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, they will be more healthy and they start to think healthy
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 body and spending energy
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accurate
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way
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 bring us more efficiency.
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, many scientists claim that
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 who do sports are more successful. National athletes say that they have been doing sports since childhood and it is evident that they owe their success to
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their childhood. That’s why they are predisposed to showing breakthrough thanks to spending
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doing sports and so forth in their childhood. It is worthwhile to note that participating
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activities
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 aids young
people
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 to be social because they have a huge chance to meet friends in these
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.
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, they are predisposed to communication with more
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 and it is beneficial to boost their self-confidence. In
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, hey can easily adjust themselves fully to public
areas
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 like classrooms because they learn how to communicate with
people
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.
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, it can not be denied that the aforementioned
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 not only enable them to be prosperous but
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 boost their self-confidence. When it comes to the benefits of allocating
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 for studying, it is evident that
learning
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 process helps students to climb the career ladder because in work
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 some degrees have to be achieved and obtaining the aforementioned degrees can be provided only
studying
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 hard.
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 academic
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 success . If prospective employees have received a certificate regarding achievement in his courses, they have a huge chance to work in
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 area. It can not be denied that forcing is a bad
way
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 if parents want to manage their child
time
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 accurately for doing physical
activities
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 or training. They are predisposed to being neglectful and effortless because
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 which
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 made constrainedly leads to dislike doing it.
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, parents should give their
children
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 the right to choose their own decisions and it can
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 about which actions they want to participate
.
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, they start to strive for excellence because all of them are determined by them. To sum up, the balance of
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 management for both physical actions and school lessons can be provided because two of them are necessary for
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 future and the method of
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 can not be used for raising
children
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. Parents should attach importance to
children
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’s decisions.
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