Teenagers are spending an increasing amount of time on the internet, and this is having a negative effect on their social skills. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is true that the

internet

nowadays

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such

a significant impact on

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human life

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with

teenagers

. The youngsters today tend to spend too much time on the

internet

for a lot of personal purposes. While

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agree with the idea that the net would have detrimental effects on

teenagers

, I do believe that cyberspace could

also

bring benefits for youngsters if they use the web in the right way.

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the

one

hand, there are a variety of reasons why

teenagers

can be harmed by the

internet

.

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, spending too much time would lead

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serious consequences for them. Youngsters would become addicted to some types of social network

such

as Facebook of

Instargram

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Instagram

easily

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leads them will be no longer be aware of the realistic of the world

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.

Secondly

, the

internet

also

influences negatively

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the study performance of students at school.

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friend

friends

, has been banned to go to school for three days because he had expressed

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rude behaviour with his teacher on

facebook

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. That why lots of parents in my country now are starting to prevent their kids from

suffing

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suffering

surfing

the net

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the other hand, we can not deny

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that the

internet

brings for us

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some compelling reasons. Cyberspace is an unlimited source of information that

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teenagers

to broaden their knowledge efficiently.

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young people are able to make new friends through

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social media that could help them improve their confidence and complete interpersonal skills. In

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addition

, with the adverse situation of the covid pandemic, study online is

one

of the most

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essential

and efficient solutions for students not to forget lessons they had been

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taught

at school. In conclusion, it is certain that the

internet

could result in some unexpected consequences for

teenagers

, but

this

by no means the net is

indespendable

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indispensable

for adolescents because of its outstanding achievements