Success is often measured in term of how much money somebody has earned. Do you think the wealth is a good measure of success? How else could we measure whether somebody is successful or not?
Mostly
success
is considered as directly proportional to the amount of currency earned by a person
. In my perspective, money
is not an appropriate factor to measure the victory of a person
. I believe that a person
with self-satisfaction and his contributions to society
makes them successful.
Although
sometimes many people
with a lot of wealth
usually considered as the role models and legends of society
due to their image and costly lifestyle, I believe that a person
should never be qualified as successful based on his financial status because I see many people
in society
how to own a lot of money
but still feel lack of self-satisfaction and unhappy as they are in the race of earning more and more money
and has left out with nothing except money
and ultimately an unhappy person
can never be successful. Success
comes with how happy a person
is living his life and making others happy. For example
, a group
of psychology students conducted a survey on two groups, group
A consist of rich business people
and group
B with people
from middle-class daily wage labour, and the result says that group
A people
are having goals to earn more money
to become top in the market to make themself qualify as a successful person
and group
B people
says that, they are happy with the family and satisfied with what they have which make them feel successful. This
proves that success
is not considered by the wealth
of the person
.
We should measure the success
of a person
based on his service to society
and not on their wealth
. History always remembered the people
based on their good deeds to society
but not due to their wealth
or rich lifestyle. For example
, the majority of the people
remember and worship mother Theresa but not any businessman. Moreover
, the worlds famous award "Nobel price" is given to the people
how has served society
as they are considered as successful by the world and not give to the millionaires in society
. This
shows that money
is not the factor but the thoughts of the people
towards the wellness of the society
that made them successful. This
proves that success
is always measured by a person
's good thoughts and services to society
,
In conclusion, people
with more money
are considered more successful in life. In my view, money
is not a factor to decide the success
of a person
. Successful people
are the ones who always feel self-satisfied and work towards the wellbeing of other people
in the community.Submitted by jj on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
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