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These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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Information technology underlines every aspect of life. The emerging technology
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society
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 daily activities and improve the quality of life. The computer
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 has taken over the work culture, so many
people
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 are able to
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 remotely from home. I believe that
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 has more benefits than drawbacks.
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 with,
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evolving technology
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 the community's life easier. There are significant benefits
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 working remotely from home. While
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this
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 pandemic enforces
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 to limit the moving space and physical interaction, the computer keeps us connected virtually. The global
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 collapsed
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 the very beginning of lockdown because of COVID-19 and continued
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 a certain period of time. Many countries manage to handle the downfalls by moving all activities, including working and studying, through
online
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 meeting. So,
people
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 will stay productive while they are isolating at home.
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, it keeps us safe from the virus, yet, keeps us sane from lonesome. Because the feeling of left out often attacks
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 the absence of communication to companions.
People
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 who exposed to COVID-19,
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, they shocked and sadden by the reality that they should away and isolate
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duration
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 of 14 days. As they are
psycologically
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psychologically
 shaken, their family and friends are able to reach out and support them through
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.
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, the classical working culture has, indeed, overtaken by virtual room. The nature needs of human as social beings to socialize with others physically is unquestionable. So
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, the principal
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 a 'new normal' protocol.
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 campaign allows
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 to communicate as before the pandemic hit, with some exceptionals of wearing
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, keep a distance, and keep a limited crowd. By way of conclusion, the new trend of remote working is the best solution during
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 pandemic to stay productive.
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, human desire natural bonding to stay sane, but need to pay attention to 'new normal' protocol to keep the beloved ones stay safe.

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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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