You are going to move out of your apartment in a English-speaking country. Your landlord is a very good person, who has assisted you a lot during your stay. Meanwhile, your friend would like to rent the flat after you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, •Let your landlord know that you will be leaving •Thank you landlord for his/her help •Tel him/her about your friend

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Dear Mr. Smith, How are you? I hope you are doing well. I am writing

this

letter to you to inform you that I am moving to the

U.S.A

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U.S.A.

next week, and I recommend my close friend to you to consider renting out the apartment after me.

Firstly

, I would like to thank you for your unwavering support and love during my stay here, you have been a great support to me and I have enjoyed my time here.

However

, as I've got a wonderful business opportunity in the

U.S.A

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U.S.A.

I have decided to move there, I have already booked my flight ticket for 27th May and I will vacate the flat on the same day. Do

yoou

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you

remember John? the guy you met at my flat on

newyear

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New Year's

Eve, Since, his landlord is planning to sell the apartment, he is looking for a flat in the city. As, you have met him before, and you know how good that guy is, I was wondering if you could consider him renting out the flat. Let me tell you

this

, he is truly a gentleman: no

smoking

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smoke

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, no late-night parties, and pays his rent on time. let me know

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apply

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if he is a match to your requirements, and I will share his contact details with you. Anyways, see you around, let's be in touch. Take care, Sufian.

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suitable writing tone

Try to maintain a consistent formal tone throughout the letter. Avoid overly casual language like 'let's be in touch' and instead use 'I look forward to staying in touch.'

complete response

Revisit small typos and grammatical errors such as 'Do yoou' and 'newyear Eve.' These minor errors can impact the overall polish of your letter.

complete response

You have addressed all the required points in the letter, including informing the landlord about your departure, expressing gratitude, and recommending your friend.

greeting and closing

Your letter includes a greeting and a closing, which adds to the overall flow and cohesiveness.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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6Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

226 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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Suitable writing tone

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