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Many high school students take part time jobs. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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 many cultures, adolescents are encouraged to
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 not universally encouraged, as many people feel
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with working high
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students
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. On the one hand,
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 gain business exposure and learn to handle money.
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, companies like McDonald’s often hire high
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students
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 their front cash registers. For these young adults, they are learning both how to deal among
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with people in a professional way and how to transact money. As these sorts of
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 abilities are not taught in schools, it is clear that several advantages derive from
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 who choose to
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 years spend
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in a restaurant in an underdeveloped
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 of my city. The clientele often had serious personal problems,
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 restaurant that my
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 grades started to suffer. As
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by a case-by-case basis. So long as a working arrangement does not infringe upon a student’s safety or their grades, it is recommended that
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to all adolescent people
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