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Many high school students take part time jobs. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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 many cultures, adolescents are encouraged to
work
part
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time
. But
this
 is a phenomenon
that is
 not universally encouraged, as many people feel
such
 an arrangement has drawbacks.
This
 essay will look at the advantages and disadvantages associated among
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to
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with working high
school
students
. On the one hand,
students
 who
work
part
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time
 gain business exposure and learn to handle money.
For example
, companies like McDonald’s often hire high
school
students
 to
work
 their front cash registers. For these young adults, they are learning both how to deal among
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below
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with people in a professional way and how to transact money. As these sorts of
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 abilities are not taught in schools, it is clear that several advantages derive from
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to
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towards
students
 working
part
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time
.
However
,
on the other hand
,
students
 who choose to
work
 during their high
school
 years spend
time
 away from their studies and may be exposed to dangerous situations.
For instance
, I remember as a student once working by
/
within
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in a restaurant in an underdeveloped
part
 of my city. The clientele often had serious personal problems,
such
 as drug and alcohol addiction. To make matters worse, I worked so many weekly hours at
this
 restaurant that my
school
 grades started to suffer. As
this
 experience shows, there are several disadvantages that can befall working
students
. Following
this
 look, it can be concluded that
part
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time
work
 among
students
 should be engaged on
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for
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by a case-by-case basis. So long as a working arrangement does not infringe upon a student’s safety or their grades, it is recommended that
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time
work
 be pursued by
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from
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to all adolescent people
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